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April 28th, 2016, 9:26 am

Average Rating: 5.00
ah yes the hotsprings, that place full of grannies in game
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YESSSSS!!!!!!

Ah, Gold you lucky dog. Yes, my dream has come true.

Posted at April 28th, 2016, 9:43 am

Internal Squee

*EXTERNAL SQUEEEE!* <3

Posted at April 28th, 2016, 9:48 am

About the dialogue...

Good day, new-ish reader (I began reading last month) but otherwise thus far extremely fond of your comic. I've been enjoying your comic since then and look forward to the updates every time I see them.

I've just one query about this comic: the fifth panel. The English is a tad confusing, as you've used "Meanwhile", which is usually used to signify that someone is elsewhere while priorly depicted events occur at the same time (so Crystal was with Gold AND at the Hot Springs?). May I suggest swapping out for a "Soon After" or a "Later that Day", as it would suggest a short time passage?

The talk is also a tad confusing. "You're the first youg lady that I've seen around" is fine, but Crystal's reply "It's because my scar stop hurting for a while everytime I come here" sounds like she's answering a different query. May I suggest changing Crystal's dialogue to "Actually, I used to come regularly to stop my scar hurting, but I've been busy lately..."? It sounds better when paired with the query of the lady.

Though that's my personal opinion on the subject, my apologies if I sound like a twit.

Posted at April 28th, 2016, 10:34 am

LogicShogun
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@Instrutilus: wow someone stealing my grammar nazi mojo

just kidding, i don't mind. sometimes comics go like 3 weeks before i notice a grammatical error, and nobody has helped miiz correct it yet, so it's nice having someone else noticing

Posted at April 28th, 2016, 2:28 pm

@LogicShogun: Hijacked like Peach by Bowser >:D

Hmm, well if she needs a proof-reader, I'm an Englishman, so who better than to figure out this stupid language of ours than someone from the country whom made it? :L

Posted at April 28th, 2016, 3:21 pm

Zoruaeon
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Omg Crystal-Chan kissed Goldpai Omg Kawaiiii

Posted at April 28th, 2016, 12:50 pm

Finally!!!! (Fan girl) I've been waiting for that a long time

Posted at April 28th, 2016, 3:14 pm

There's a good amount of Flannery ship-planning down the drain...

Posted at April 28th, 2016, 3:34 pm

Posted by Derp (Guest)
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@(Guest): In yo face! *does victory lap around Lavaridge Gym*

Posted at April 28th, 2016, 7:59 pm

@Derp: Didn't say it was MY planning. My sister reads this too, and she's a fan of (pointless) love triangles. I, for one, am quite pleased about this.

Posted at April 28th, 2016, 9:43 pm

Meta-Akira
Posted by Meta-Akira
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But... but the ice cream. D:

Posted at April 28th, 2016, 5:46 pm

Yuns
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Probably the only time we'll ever see a boy seem happy that the girl he likes just ditched him mid-date like that.

(In all seriousness though, that's too cute and I'm so pleased with this turn of events)

Posted at April 28th, 2016, 9:18 pm

Posted by Mewzou (Guest)
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*sees second panel*
*eye twitches*
Friend: Are you okay? You seem pissed.
I can't hold it.
Friend: hold what?
Cover your ears
Friend: *covers ears*
OHHHHHHH MMMMYYYYYYYY GAAAAAAWWWDDDDDD FRUCK FRUCK FRUCK THR OTP JUST HAPPENED EEE EEEEE EEEEEE FRUCK I'M DYING SOMEONE HEEEELP ITS FRUCKING CUTE *rambles on*
Friend: °-°

Posted at April 29th, 2016, 1:53 am

Posted by M-Dog (Guest)
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The Dream

So is the living the dream thing about the kiss or the fact that he now has 2 ice-creams?

I'm guessing the kiss...

Posted at April 29th, 2016, 8:27 am

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I know Flannery is trouble! She's gonna make Crystal jealous

Posted at April 29th, 2016, 1:05 pm

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