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January 23rd, 2017, 6:30 am

Average Rating: 5.00
guys please you're making the giant chicken nervous
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wedward45
Posted by wedward45
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Mommy and Daddy are fighting again.

Posted at January 16th, 2017, 6:58 pm

Gold, you done f***ed up. Again.

Posted at January 23rd, 2017, 7:21 am

Posted by M-Dog (Guest)
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Dammit Gold

Don't ruin it!

Posted at January 23rd, 2017, 7:51 am

Glite32
Posted by Glite32
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Puts arm around gold* Listen gold don't fuck this up for us! We've waited a long time for this shit so don't ruin it!

Posted at January 23rd, 2017, 11:56 am

I like your comic, I really do. But I feel like the Pokémon are pretty much unrelevant. In your last comic every Pokémon could talk and most of them had a big role. I even knew all their nickames. Now I don't even know the teams, all I know is that Crys has a Sceptile and Gold a Blaziken and a Vigoroth. It's great that there is so many character development going on but it still is a Pokémon Nuzlocke, not a Bold & the Beautiful episode. Bring back the usefulness of the Pokémon and make them a bigger part of the story again.

I hope I didn't insulted you with my reaction, it's constructive critism, because the rest of your comic is awesome and I still thoroughly enjoy it.

Posted at January 23rd, 2017, 1:52 pm

miizj
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@Danny199: i've been already criticized for this and i started this series fully aware this would probably happen. i guess that planning a sequel series made me too worried about solving the old plot points i left unresolved from the previous series and i'm not denying its flaws

as a matter of fact i stated here multiple times how hard it is for me to just slap 12 different personalities into the pokemon w/o having to sacrifice other aspects that i personally consider more relevant for a consistent comic series (pacing, plot, etc), so i just want to make clear that this is an old issue i have since the crystal series and i'm pretty sure you're just with strong nostalgia feelings because most teammates back then barely had any lines at all

so yes, my writing is far from perfect and i'm constantly seeking for improvement so i appreciate that you guys point out what makes you frustrated but this is an old topic that i already said i can only solve by providing extra content because if i stop to rewrite the whole thing i will never finish the series because the story is already long af

i'm already at my limit of stuff i can do for free w/o getting serious issues w/ my bills so i'm honestly sorry about that. i hope you keep enjoying the series despite its obvious writing issues and still stay around when i launch other comic projects eventually. hopefully my writing will have improved a lil' bit more to feel less frustrating

Posted at January 23rd, 2017, 6:22 pm

@miizj: I don't mind the writing, not at all, it was just that the Pokémon make less appearances. In the last comic, although they might not have talked much, they did appear a lot more, or I'm wrong on that one.

I'm still enjoying the comic and I will always be ;)

Posted at January 25th, 2017, 8:27 am

miizj
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@Danny199: yeah, that's true, that's why this year i want to focus on the teammates for most of the extra content i do on DA weekly (probably gonna start to mess with gijinkas designs and stuff like that)

Posted at January 25th, 2017, 8:32 am

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